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Worth a good chuckle. Like the humor, good audio quality. In the future, remove the subscribe pitch at the end.

storytellerYT responds:

Got it haha

Animation was great, jokes were fairly well timed and entertaining, but the voice acting could really use some work. Well done but keep at it!

I only gave this a 5 because Newgrounds wouldn't let me give it a 6. Flawless work!

Calling an early front page. Excellent work!

Really your first? You've got quite a future ahead!

Flawless.

Great story telling, very nice art, good timing all around. But that audio.

You've got great potential both as an animator and story teller. Take a look at some audio tips from voice pros around here - there's actually some Flashes about recording good audio even with a piss poor mic.

Looking forward to more!

Seeing the evolution of this over the years has been fantastic. You've certainly reached a whole new level here. Excellent overall style, art, interactivity, and plot - loved the twist! Who knows it we'll see another, but this one was worth the wait!

Nice animation, bit of a drawn out intro with a minimal punch line. You have a good style and a nice set up but it lacked that final joke. Some things I've seen work well: a brief 2-3 second scene at the end of the "youtube credits." Something to wrap it up - maybe the place isn't dangerous, or he went in anyway, or something entertaining happening out on the yard.

Keep at it and keep refining :)

Welcome back! Looking forward to seeing things rolling again. Best of luck with the pitch! You've got a newgrounds audience for support!

vezanmatics responds:

Glad I can always count on NG as a good audience!

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