Worth a good chuckle. Like the humor, good audio quality. In the future, remove the subscribe pitch at the end.
Got it haha
Animation was great, jokes were fairly well timed and entertaining, but the voice acting could really use some work. Well done but keep at it!
I only gave this a 5 because Newgrounds wouldn't let me give it a 6. Flawless work!
Calling an early front page. Excellent work!
Really your first? You've got quite a future ahead!
Great story telling, very nice art, good timing all around. But that audio.
You've got great potential both as an animator and story teller. Take a look at some audio tips from voice pros around here - there's actually some Flashes about recording good audio even with a piss poor mic.
Looking forward to more!
Seeing the evolution of this over the years has been fantastic. You've certainly reached a whole new level here. Excellent overall style, art, interactivity, and plot - loved the twist! Who knows it we'll see another, but this one was worth the wait!
Nice animation, bit of a drawn out intro with a minimal punch line. You have a good style and a nice set up but it lacked that final joke. Some things I've seen work well: a brief 2-3 second scene at the end of the "youtube credits." Something to wrap it up - maybe the place isn't dangerous, or he went in anyway, or something entertaining happening out on the yard.
Keep at it and keep refining :)
Welcome back! Looking forward to seeing things rolling again. Best of luck with the pitch! You've got a newgrounds audience for support!
Glad I can always count on NG as a good audience!
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