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[Closing Time 2]

Progressing still ^_^

Great work guys. Ive noticed a few improved things since the last ep. If you keep working at it one day it should hit front page.

Things i suggest for that - try to add some more random funny things, for example the french scene. Also try to add some temporary characters to build a better plot. Just experiment with some stuff.

Keep it up

SmigeFlash responds:

I'm glad you liked it. However, there will be no more Closing Time, as my ability is now far greater than that of this.

[FBF Randomness - Marinia]

Needs another kick

You have a good idea but you need to add more patterns a line moving around doesnt stay intresting for long remember cuase and affect type things, line grows into a circle, planet is formed just stuff like that to make it more intresting

n00b-l0s3r responds:

I was about to do that.

Unfortunately I don't know if I can. I did have some lines form drops.

[I dunno o_O]

I like it

I gave this a protection point yesterday forgot to review it :p Good work its short but looks good

Confuzzled responds:

thanx, I have started work on characers for a new one but before that I might make 'Weird Music Video 4' useing them, as i kinda promised a new weird music video months ago

[Chrono Break]

Nice

Very well done. 8 bit animation looked good

Mystic-Skye responds:

thank you kindly!

[Rising conflict]

Not bad

Hell it wasnt bad at all kinda funny. Great work

night-raider responds:

Thank you.

[FF: Mixed in Balamb]

WOw

Great work! Made fun of FF and its own plot amazing work
and dbz and speed racer lol

Toonimated responds:

hehe thanks!!