Deathofyou's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SpongeMen SquareWatch]

Fantastic! Excellent from art to sounds, mimicing voices, throwing in show references and matching the Watchmen. Truly well done.

[Internet Withdrawal]

Your animation style continues to improve! Great humor, great animations, excellent audio. Keep em coming!

[The Deadly T-Shirt]

Not a bad start! Keep an eye (or ear) out for sound clipping. The animation ran fairly smooth and was good for a quick laugh. Some well timed sound effects, but others were a bit of a distraction. Can certainly see the "Oney influence" in your facial animations. It fit well in the hospital scene, but don't hesitate to keep adding your own spin to it!

Last piece of advice I have I've shared with many. Newgrounds and YouTube are two very different entities. Keep the self promotion and subscription pleas for YouTube. On NG, if your work is worthy of merit, you will receive it.

Looking forward to seeing how you develop as creators. Keep at it and nice job thus far.

[Pitch - Web Design]

This is your best work yet. Very well done.

[Last Christmas]

Backgrounds were excellent, character designs very well done. The animation flowed fluidly with no need for words. And the end - way to keep true to Newgrounds' love of all things WTF. Excellent work.

[Ultimate Transforming Car]

It keeps getting better.

Well done team! The animation really shined this time. The quick jokes are short but sweet.

WaldFlieger responds:

Thanks so much!! :D

[Baby It's Cold Outside...]

Not your best work. The audio did not mesh well and the animation style is becoming a bit dull and unchanged or undeveloped from your previous work. It can be tempting to stick with a formula once you know it works, but never stop progressing.

The shameless self promotion at the end and attempt at audience interaction needs to stop. This is not YouTube. A quick pitch for your work or site is absolutely fine, but half the video should be not be view mining. Newgrounds is a different audience than YouTube.

itsalexclark responds:

thanks man. not every video is going to be the same. this one was super short and fun. it was just a simple joke. You'll be excited to know I'm working really hard on a pickle dipper sequel that's all hand drawn animation.

It's a lot more complicated but it's clearly going to take a lot longer to finish so it's not up yet.

I completely agree that I have to push my self. And it might not seem like it at first glance but I probably spent a good two hours animating that short little bit where she puts her coat on. it was a small push but I still learned a lot from it.

all in all I'm definitely going to be shortening up the talking at the end of my videos - which sucks - because I do like talking to you all and getting to learn about you in the comments. I find it interesting. thanks for continually watching and making sure I stay on game. I hope I continue to impress you guys as I love the strong sense of community here.

[Savlonic : Computer Guy]

Was wondering where you guys went. The wait was well worth it. Excellent animation coupled with a catchy song. Well done as always

[Bus Stop Abortion]

Newgrounds classic style animation. Timeless. Excellent story telling. Well done sir.

brewstew responds:

thanks a lot man!

[Knife To Meat You]

A sturdy and enjoyable WTF. Nice animation. Minimal use of sounds worked for the short. Style and humor reminded me a lot of Ren and Stimpy. Great job.

HugoVRB responds:

Thanks! Cartoons have always been something very special in my life and I want to keep the medium alive!