Deathofyou's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Mario Doesn't Want To Run]

Worth a good chuckle. Like the humor, good audio quality. In the future, remove the subscribe pitch at the end.

storytellerYT responds:

Got it haha

[Alice in Wonderbra!]

Really your first? You've got quite a future ahead!

[E.T. Excursion Intro]

Welcome back! Looking forward to seeing things rolling again. Best of luck with the pitch! You've got a newgrounds audience for support!

vezanmatics responds:

Glad I can always count on NG as a good audience!

[Ultimate Transforming Car]

It keeps getting better.

Well done team! The animation really shined this time. The quick jokes are short but sweet.

WaldFlieger responds:

Thanks so much!! :D

[Baby It's Cold Outside...]

Not your best work. The audio did not mesh well and the animation style is becoming a bit dull and unchanged or undeveloped from your previous work. It can be tempting to stick with a formula once you know it works, but never stop progressing.

The shameless self promotion at the end and attempt at audience interaction needs to stop. This is not YouTube. A quick pitch for your work or site is absolutely fine, but half the video should be not be view mining. Newgrounds is a different audience than YouTube.

itsalexclark responds:

thanks man. not every video is going to be the same. this one was super short and fun. it was just a simple joke. You'll be excited to know I'm working really hard on a pickle dipper sequel that's all hand drawn animation.

It's a lot more complicated but it's clearly going to take a lot longer to finish so it's not up yet.

I completely agree that I have to push my self. And it might not seem like it at first glance but I probably spent a good two hours animating that short little bit where she puts her coat on. it was a small push but I still learned a lot from it.

all in all I'm definitely going to be shortening up the talking at the end of my videos - which sucks - because I do like talking to you all and getting to learn about you in the comments. I find it interesting. thanks for continually watching and making sure I stay on game. I hope I continue to impress you guys as I love the strong sense of community here.

[Bus Stop Abortion]

Newgrounds classic style animation. Timeless. Excellent story telling. Well done sir.

brewstew responds:

thanks a lot man!

[Knife To Meat You]

A sturdy and enjoyable WTF. Nice animation. Minimal use of sounds worked for the short. Style and humor reminded me a lot of Ren and Stimpy. Great job.

HugoVRB responds:

Thanks! Cartoons have always been something very special in my life and I want to keep the medium alive!

[Homophones]

Excellent. Usually I find short toons to have terrible integration of sound or voice acting; not the case here as both were nailed perfectly. The animation flowed smoothly based on the style. The speed of the animation lent itself to the joke as it did not focus on the journey itself. Very well done!

dylan responds:

Thanks!

[Can You Hear That?]

Quick funny joke. I enjoyed it. You are however missing a 0 in the number of fans. "2,000,00" not sure if that was intentional

iamprikle responds:

it was haha, we only got about 1450 subs on youtube, but all within 2 weeks, very suddenly. so we decided to exagerate it as a joke <;

[EVo3: Finally Some Action]

Great job. Overall entertaining and enjoyable to watch. My one suggestion would be to turn down the effects of Xleek's voice a bit. He's a bit difficult to understand with everything stacked on to make him sound alien-y.

vezanmatics responds:

duly noted. Thank you!